hee hee

– you’ll have to wait a bit longer to see the puss story to continue

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the lettering for this one was the quickesf so far.
what took me quite long though was a language thing: in the englixh version, in the 3rd panel it first said ‘i then got a letter’ but with the second ‘then’ following in panel 4 i had to get rid of one. although i feel it sounded better with it. any native-speaker comments on this?

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  1. Veröffentlich von Anke am 6. Februar 2006 um 13:50

    hi till,

    suggestion panel 4:
    “why are you still here after all” (or something like that)

    question panel 3:
    “i then got a letter”: shouldn’t this be “then i got a letter” in English?

    besserwisserische grüße 😉
    anke



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